deviant ART

[x]
Subscribe Now | Buy deviantWEAR | Advertise Here

Beneath The Lipstick by ~Sazlik:iconSazlik:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Sociopolitical > Haiku & Eastern


Beneath the lipstick
there are lips that have something
important to say.
©2008 ~Sazlik
Details
Submitted: March 22
File Size: 179 bytes
Image Size: 0 bytes
Resolution: 0×0
Comments: 15
Favourites & Collections: 3 [who?]

Views
Total: 48
Today: 0

Downloads
Total: 7
Today: 0

Thumb

Author's Comments

Well, it's follows the haiku syllable rules, if that makes it count. I know there's more to them than that, but it's close enough for me.

And yes, mostly I'm just submitting this super-old-found-in-my-old-stuff-again "piece" because I was excited that I accidentally wrote something that fitted 5-7-5. Please forgive me. ^_^

((And actually, as a general rule, I'm not a fan of haikus.))

Devious Comments

love 2 2 joy 0 0 wow 1 1 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0

~saturninesweetness:iconsaturninesweetness: Mar 23, 2008, 4:43:25 PM Mood: Love
Oooh, I like it.

:aww:


& I'm not much fan of Haikus either.
:-P

-Fobo

--
Alone, alone, all all alone
Alone on a wide wide sea
But never a saint took pity on
My soul in agony


~Sazlik:iconSazlik: Mar 23, 2008, 4:55:01 PM
Thanks again, for the watch and the comment. :heart:

Actually, I've keep finding haikus which are actually pretty clever around dA. They're beginning to sway me. (I still don't like writing them, though. XD)

--
Kaitlin (aka Sazlik, Spekki)
Maeve-Proclaimed Junior Assistant Supreme Ruler of the Universe (*all hail Maeve*). Life motto: "Just add triangles!" Member of the Comment Exchange--will comment back!
~saturninesweetness:iconsaturninesweetness: Mar 23, 2008, 5:09:54 PM
Heh


People around DA are pretty clever in general.
:XD:

--
Alone, alone, all all alone
Alone on a wide wide sea
But never a saint took pity on
My soul in agony


~Eisai:iconEisai: Mar 24, 2008, 6:12:07 AM
I really like this one. Just because I've never been one of those girls who wears all the makeup and has a purse, etc. But I have friends who are like that, and just because they like to look pretty doesn't mean they're dumb bimbos.

--
I am young and out for glory~ Deb Scott
~Sazlik:iconSazlik: Mar 24, 2008, 11:08:21 AM
Thanks! :heart:

--
Kaitlin (aka Sazlik, Spekki)
Maeve-Proclaimed Junior Assistant Supreme Ruler of the Universe (*all hail Maeve*). Life motto: "Just add triangles!" Member of the Comment Exchange--will comment back!
~bohemian-lover:iconbohemian-lover: Mar 24, 2008, 11:53:55 PM Mood: Adoration
oh thanks kaitlin this poem about me is really super






oh come on










it was clearly about me
x
~Sazlik:iconSazlik: Mar 25, 2008, 4:01:23 AM
Well, nooooo.

But I'm glad you think it's super, I guess. ^_^

--
Kaitlin (aka Sazlik, Spekki)
Maeve-Proclaimed Junior Assistant Supreme Ruler of the Universe (*all hail Maeve*). Life motto: "Just add triangles!" Member of the Comment Exchange--will comment back!
~W-Uno:iconW-Uno: Mar 25, 2008, 7:07:44 AM
I did a photography project with haiku once. I think in 5-7-5 now. It can be a really nice style.

Anyway, I like the message here. Bravo.

--
Go then - there are other worlds than these.
~Sazlik:iconSazlik: Mar 25, 2008, 10:01:17 PM
Oh yeah, I think I remember reading that in your gallery somewhere. :-)

Thanks. :heart:

--
Kaitlin (aka Sazlik, Spekki)
Maeve-Proclaimed Junior Assistant Supreme Ruler of the Universe (*all hail Maeve*). Life motto: "Just add triangles!" Member of the Comment Exchange--will comment back!
Previous Page    12    Next Page
Sign up to leave feedback! <3